"STORY-MAKERS' CORNER"
"Little Ting."—Better work than before. Try not towandeir away from the story with unnecessary • conversation. ■ :'
"Tippetty Toes," Brooklyn.—A sweet story, but do not repeat words and phrases.
Pearl West. —You should have explained the ghost...; . 3 smuggler,or a thief in hiding. Write ou only one side of the paper.
"Stalky."—A very well-written story. It will be printed soon. "Wind Sprite."—You are?a promising young writer, Marie. Keep practising.
' "Alpine Violet."—More an essay than a story, pixie. You see there was nothing to guess or wonder about. :
"Brown Owl." —A dairify story, verj-' neatly written. Good work,-elf. ;.
"Jo."—Your work is not quite ready for Printer Man. Keep on' trying. ~■ "Cecelia." —A charming littlo story.: May I see more of your work? ~
Dove:"^—lt is a very worn plot. lam sure y.ou could write a story.round a fresher idea. "Briarberry."—Excellent . work, pixie. Look for, your story next week. "Nature Lass."—We printed a similar story in the Ring a few1 weeks ago, so yours will not. bemused for some time.
"Dick Wnittington."—An interesting story. Did you make it' yourself ? It is not marked "original"' or "copied." "Goldilocks." —You write well for a ten-year-old. Try 'a different kind of story, -elf. ' . ' ' '
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Evening Post, Volume CXVIII, Issue 102, 27 October 1934, Page 20
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