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Peter, Mnkiiretii: First paragraph, bad; theme, good: too rambling In the telling, spec'aliy the moralizing at the end. The Dutch story was good on the whole, though, and I guoKB it had to be rushed to citteti the mail. Snow Fairy, Takapuu; Cold, Dorothy—and with such a pen-name? You should be part of these snowy days I Did your Brownie emblem decide part of the penWMh S Ooa't latent taU 100
nil about the Wnipaiva visit. Many hupl>les I I’iiddy. Greytown: Little pigs and lambs —yes, spring must be round the corner. Some of the Howers are appearing, too. Write whenever you get time from your studies, Mary. Cutty Hark, Ton Marina: Basing the tale as you did on history, you should have enlarged more on tile details—-the dream, discovery of the hole and Hans’s brave act. I However, the story wee well told aud seW* i ly typed.
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Dominion, Volume 32, Issue 258, 29 July 1939, Page 7 (Supplement)
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